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The swearing does make it seem like an eleven year old who doesn't understand swearing wrote it.
I FUCKING love these FUCKING clownfish they FUCKING look so FUCKING cool and SHIT they are FUCKING awesome and they are FUCKING great
FUCK
I know you're trying to do a bit. But you seem to have misunderstood my comment. so I'll explain.
It's the use of the word fuck but it's placement. It doesn't fit and makes the sentence rather awkward. Hence why I said it was written by an eleven year old discovering swearing and not understanding it.
It fits perfectly well. The placement changes the emphasis subtly.
"That's a tall fucking building"
"That's a fucking tall building"
The second calls the listener's attention to the emphasized aspect whereas the first might reference the height in relation to other aspects... but would be more context dependent than the second form.
Would it be better if it's written as "a deadly fucking sea organism"?
Yes.